得病以前,我受父母宠爱,在家中横行霸道,一旦隔离,拘禁在花园山坡上一幢小房子里,我顿感打入冷宫,十分郁郁不得志起来。一个春天的傍晚,园中百花怒放,父母在园中设宴,一时宾客云集,笑语四溢。我在山坡的小屋里,悄悄掀起窗帘,窥见园中大千世界,一片繁华,自己的哥姐

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问题     得病以前,我受父母宠爱,在家中横行霸道,一旦隔离,拘禁在花园山坡上一幢小房子里,我顿感打入冷宫,十分郁郁不得志起来。一个春天的傍晚,园中百花怒放,父母在园中设宴,一时宾客云集,笑语四溢。我在山坡的小屋里,悄悄掀起窗帘,窥见园中大千世界,一片繁华,自己的哥姐,堂表弟兄,也穿插其间,个个喜气洋洋。一霎时,一阵被人摒弃,为世所遗的悲愤兜上心头,禁不住痛哭起来。

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答案 Before I fell ill, my parents doted on me a 1ot. I could have my way at home. Once I was iso1ated and confined in a chamber on the hillside of the garden, I suddenly felt I was neglected and became very depressed. One spring evening, my parents held a banquet in the garden, where all sorts of flowers were in full bloom. For a time, guests gathered there, cheering and 1aughing. I quietly lifted the curtain of the chamber and caught a glimpse of the wonderfu1 and bustling scene in the garden. I saw my brothers, sisters and cousins were a11 there, radiant with joy. All of a sudden, I was possessed by the feeling of being abandoned. Struck by both grief and indignation, I couldn’t help crying bitterly.

解析 <1>横行霸道视情况我们可以用act violently,act like a tyrant,play the bully等来译。此处指“我”在家中做事任性、想干什么干什么,无所约束,故宜用have my way来译。have (it) one’s (own) way为习语,表示“随心所欲”、“想怎么样就怎么样”,it与own均可以省略。
<2>拘禁此处不带由法律含义,故不可用put sb.under arrest,detain,take sb.into custody等译。
<3>打入冷宫有be consigned to limbo,be left out in the cold,be neglected等译法。
<4>不得志此处指“不愉快”、“寡欢”等。
<5>百花怒放可译成a11 sorts of flowers bloomed/blossomed,或a11 sorts of flowers were in full bloom/blossom。此处不宜将这一内容与后一句并列,而宜处理为“园中”的补充说明信息。
<6>窥见“窥视”常用peep at来译。此处强调结果而非动作,故宜用catch/get a glimpse of。
<7>大千世界一般有多种译法,如the big world,the boundless universe,the kaleidoscopic world。此处意指“精彩场面”,故译成wonderful and bustling scene。
<8>喜气洋洋常见译法有be bursting with happiness/joy,be filled with gaiety,be overflowing with happiness,look cheerful,be radiant with joy/delight。  由于“我”从山坡小屋里窥见这一切,最后两种译法更可取。
<9>悲愤可译为grief and indignation。
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