You are a freshman and planning to apply for a bank loan. Write a letter to the bank to 1) introduce yourself briefly, 2

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问题     You are a freshman and planning to apply for a bank loan. Write a letter to the bank to
    1) introduce yourself briefly,
    2) explain the reasons of applying for a bank loan.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Do not sign your name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address.

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答案Dear Sir or Madam, [1]I’ve heard that you provide loans for students from Western China, so I am writing to apply for a loan from you. [2]I am a freshman of Shandong University, coming from a village in Ningxia. [3]Both of my parents are peasants and I have a sister who is studying in high school. To pay for my first year of university, my parents had tried all the means they could think of. Since the necessary expenses during my four years’ study would be nearly 50,000yuan, I am [4] in desperate need for a loan. [5] Enclosed is a copy of grade report in College Entrance Examination, as well as a recommendation of my present dean.[6]Thanks for your consideration [7]Looking forking to a prompt reply from you. Yours respectfully, Li Ming

解析 第一段开门见山地表明写信的目的——向对方申请银行贷款;第二段简要介绍自己及自己的家庭情况;第三段首先告知随信所附的成绩单和推荐信,以便对方确认自己是否有资格,然后表达感谢,并希望尽快得到答复。
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