情景:你要去美国,想请你的朋友Jack帮你找一处住所。 任务: 请你用英语给他写一个50个词左右的电子邮件。内容包括: 去美国的目的; 何时到达美国; 在美国呆多久; 对住所的要求。 电子邮件写在答题卡上该题

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问题 情景:你要去美国,想请你的朋友Jack帮你找一处住所。
任务:
    请你用英语给他写一个50个词左右的电子邮件。内容包括:
    去美国的目的;
    何时到达美国;
    在美国呆多久;
    对住所的要求。
    电子邮件写在答题卡上该题的序号后。请用下面格式。
Dear Jack,
    …
                                                                    Li Min

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答案Dear Jack, I’ll go to America for further study on April 15th, as the university has approved my application, which means I need to stay there for a year. Before that, I am supposed to arrive there next month since there will be a lot of stuff to get prepared. That is why I would ask you to do me a favor and help me find an apartment. A simple one with kitchen and bathroom will do. Thank you for your time. I am looking forward to seeing you there! Li Min

解析 1.电子邮件形式和句子长度不要太单调,有时短句和长句相间显得灵活。
2.写作多用从句会使得句子更长,而且句式灵活。比如:
I’ll go to America for further study on April 15th,as the university has approved my application.It means I need to stay there for a year.
改为:I’ll go to America for further study on April 15th,as the university has approved my application,which means I need to stay there for a year.
3.亲切、口语化的语言更加受欢迎,尤其用于这种朋友间的私人信件。例:A simple one with kitchen and bathroom will do.
4.电子邮件应写得简单明了,便于阅读,太长的内容可以用附件的方式发出。一个段落大多由一到三个句子组成。
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