For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How to Improve Students’Mental Health? You should writ

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How to Improve Students’Mental Health? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.大学生的心理健康十分重要
    2.为此,学校可以……
    3.我们自己应当……

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答案 How to Improve Students’Mental Health? As is known to all, the health of our human beings consists of two aspects—physical and mental health, both of which are important to a student. However, it is quite worrying that nowadays some college students are not quite mentally healthy. The cases of suicide on campus reveal the importance of mental health. Therefore, colleges and universities should be greatly responsible for students’ mental health in their campus life. Firstly, the authorities concerned should enhance the awareness that mental fitness is important to students. Secondly, relevant courses and activities should be introduced to students so that they can learn to maintain and improve mental health. Thirdly, there should be a psychological counselling hotline or office for students to turn to when they need psychological aid. But schools alone cannot ensure the final success in improving students’ mental health. Students should also take an active part in helping themselves. They should learn to be patient, understanding, and cooperative, and increase their efforts to do more meaningful things, such as study and sports.

解析     第一段提出心理健康的重要性以及当今大学生中存在的心理健康问题,说明解决这一问题的迫切性。
    第二段分别从三个方面阐述了学校作为主要的责任者,应该采取哪些措施解决这一问题。第三句使用被动语态,并在句中穿插使用了so that引导的目的状语从句,丰富了句式。第四句在There be句型中使用了should,表示“应该有……"的意义。
    第三段表明作为大学生,应该如何努力促进自身的心理健康。第三句使用and连接两个相隔较远的并列谓语learn和increase,句末用such as进行举例说明,是较为常用的句子结构。
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