Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments.

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问题     Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
    1)  interpret the chart, and
    2)  give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words.
   

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答案 The chart shows the respondents’ opinion about how to improve food safety. As can be seen, 42.4% of them think that government supervision should be strengthened, and a further 40.7% think that the corporate social responsibility should be enhanced. In addition, enhancing other forms of supervision is also suggested, such as consumers’ supervision (11.1%), the media’s supervision (3.7%) and the supervision by shareholders in the food companies (2.2%). The survey results spell out the crucial roles played by both the government and enterprises. First, government agencies must give due attention and discretion to food safety issues. They must carry out regular tests on food samples to check and monitor food quality. Second, food enterprises must be aware of their ultimate responsibilities to provide safe food to consumers. If they fail to do so, they will face criminal charges. Therefore, enterprises are advised to commission third-party safety audit or at least do internal safety audit to avoid any possible food safety accident.

解析 该图表显示了受访者对改善食品安全的建议。从图表可见,受访者大多认为需要加强政府的监督和企业的社会责任。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:第一段描述图表。第二段从政府和企业两方面介绍应如何改善食品安全,并提出建议。
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