For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter to the University President about the Can

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
    假设你是李明,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。

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答案 A Letter to the University President About the Canteen Service on Campus Dear Mr. President, I’m very lucky to attend this world-famous university, but I am afraid I’m not content with the canteen service on campus. Firstly, food quality should be improved. Undoubtedly, there are a lot of delicious dishes, but more and more students complain about eating the same food every day. So I think the most urgent task is to promote greater diversity in food types. Secondly, food prices are a bit high. We hope that the canteen can provide us with delicious food at a reasonable price. Finally, the environment is so noisy that we can’t enjoy our meals in a good mood. I suggest that there be some soft music to help us relax. Those suggestions are not made by myself, but by many other students. We do hope that our respectable President will pay attention to our suggestions and take effective measures to improve the current situation. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

解析     第一段开篇点题,提出对学校食堂服务的不满。
    第二段分三个方面解释不满的原因:饭菜品种单一;价格过高;环境嘈杂。末句suggest后跟that引导的宾语从句,从句使用省略should的虚拟语气形式,不失为一个亮点。
    第三段表明意愿,希望校长对出现的问题给予足够的重视,采取有效措施改善现状。
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