Recent years have seen many conflicts caused by square dancing, or Guangchangwu. An increasing number of people argue that squar

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问题     Recent years have seen many conflicts caused by square dancing, or Guangchangwu. An increasing number of people argue that square dancing should be stopped for it has brought severe problems to daily life, but those who participate in square dancing believe it is a harmless activity to maintain health and be social. What is your opinion?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic;
    Should Square Dancing Be Stopped?

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答案 Should Square Dancing Be Stopped? Square dancing, or " Guangchangwu" , is a good way of keeping fit. But when people in large numbers dance to loud music in squares or parks, they make dancing a controversial issue which needs to be carefully addressed. Those arguing that square dancing should not be stopped believe that the senior can get exercise, obtain company and maintain social contacts through this activity. But it cannot be denied that Guangchangwu needs to be regulated because of the noise pollution it makes and the social instability it triggers. When people turn up the music in the public at inappropriate time, they create a din that people in the neighborhood can’t bear, which therefore leads to a spate of confrontations between people practicing Guangchangwu and neighborhood residents. Media outlets have reported an alarming number of events about square dancing: A man irritated by the loud and throbbing dancing music even fired a shotgun into the air to scare away the dancers near his house. In Hubei province, residents of a locality threw rubbish at people dancing in a square. Before that, a group of students in Hebei province calling for a quiet atmosphere to study organized a silent protest against people playing loud music by blocking the "stage" of the dancers in a square. To solve such a controversial issue, on the one hand, the authority should restrict the time, venues and the use of loudspeakers; on the other hand, senior citizens can seek for other activities such as traveling or playing mahjong. We youngsters should spend more quality time with our parents and grandparents to make them feel needed.

解析     本题属于观点论证型题目。需要选择一个立场,然后对自己的观点加以论证。可从以下三个基本思路着手。
    思路1:广场舞应该被禁止。
    广场舞扰乱公共秩序,产生的噪音影响人们的正常生活,而且有可能引发冲突。热爱广场舞的大妈们甚至把它跳到了国外的公共场所,影响国家形象。可列举近年来关于广场舞的各种新闻热点。
    思路2:广场舞不该被禁止。
    参与广场舞的多为老年人,他们本就应该得到社会的关爱,利用业余爱好强身健体、自娱自乐无可厚非。另外,广场舞一般是在广场、公园等休闲娱乐场所进行,老年人有权在这里跳舞。最重要的是,广场舞已成为一种强身健体、进行社交的流行方式,还是一种现代文化载体,不少年轻人甚至孩子参与其中。禁止广场舞会成为社会的一大损失。
    思路3:广场舞需要恰当的监管。
    广场舞不应该被禁,因为它的种种优点(参见思路2),但政府应对其加强管理,因为它确实会带来很多问题(参见思路1)。
    范文选择了思路3,分别分析了广场舞的利与弊,最后从三方面提出自己的建议。
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