Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Is a Diploma Everything? You should write

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问题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Is a Diploma Everything? You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below.
1. 目前社会上存在着迷信文凭的现象
2. 造成这一现象的原因
3. 我对此的观点
                            Is a Diploma Everything?

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答案 Is a Diploma Everything? Nowadays there is a widely held belief that diploma is everything. Some people will gain a higher diploma at all costs, and others force their children to get a higher diploma. This phenomenon can be explained by at least two reasons. On the one hand, people believe a higher diploma can guarantee a prosperous future, such as successful careers and respectable positions. On the other hand, the diploma people hold is attached to too much importance. Having a diploma is a precondition for people to do almost everything, for example, to find a job, to have a date with a girl. In my opinion, it is no doubt that diploma is important, because it shows a person’s academic level and ability. However, a diploma cannot prove everything, no matter how high a diploma is. A higher diploma can only tell others that the holder has received this kind of education. As for whether he or she is competent in working and whether he or she is virtuous, these still remain as questions.

解析 ①由题目可知这是一篇分析型作文,需要运用“描述现象——解释原因—一提出解决办法”的模式。本文按照要求可分成三部分,第一段简单介绍目前社会存在的现象;第二段分析造成这一现象的具体原因,第三段阐述自己对该问题的看法。②在每段的论述中请注意句式的变化,如定语从句、让步状语从句等;注意衔接手段的使用,如however, as for等。
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