Nowadays China is challenging examination-oriented education by advocating quality-oriented education. Lots of people are discus

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问题    Nowadays China is challenging examination-oriented education by advocating quality-oriented education. Lots of people are discussing about quality-oriented education. Write your own point of view of this trend.
    Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
                                            My View of Quality-oriented Education
   You are to write in three parts.
   In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.
   In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.
   In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 My View on Quality-oriented Education These years, exam-oriented education is gradually giving way to quality-oriented education in China despite the fact that many people are still not sure whether quality-oriented exam should be adopted or not. Personally, I think we should reform our education policy to advocate quality-oriented education. I firmly believe in the magic force of the quality-oriented education policy; and I think it will bring us lots of benefits. For one thing, quality-oriented education is necessary for one’s overall development. As we all know, from primary school to college, students, teachers and parents — all are struggling for high scores. This is because the current education system is not aimed at students’ quality, but only at developing their ability to perform well on the test. As a result, many students, even those With high scores, often do poorly when it comes to the practical application of the knowledge and theory they have learned. Therefore, China should challenge examination-oriented education by advocating quality-oriented education to ensure the overall development for students. For another, quality-oriented education reflects the true nature of education. The nature of education is to make people get knowledge, not only in different subjects, but also in different areas, which can only be achieved through quality, oriented education. Quality-oriented education will focus on the students’ ability and quality as a whole. So I think our education will not aim at making the students into "robots" or "computers", but bringing up new generation that are masters of the robots and the computers themselves.

解析    本文要求就素质教育阐述自己的观点。全文可分成三段。在第一段中阐明自己的看法;在第二段中,对自己的看法进行论证,找出理由或就自己的想法进行深入阐述;第三段中进行总结归纳。
   在文章开头的段落中,先简单描述目前中国的教育现状,然后直接点明自己的观点…I think we should reform our education policy to advocate quality-oriented education…。第二段分两个方面来阐述素质教育的优势。在这部分的写作中,可以对每一个论据都进行扩展,增强论据的说服力。注意使用一些连接词如for one thing,for another等,这样能使两个论据形成一个整体,增强文章的连贯性。最后一段对上述的观点进行总结,归纳文章的主要内容。
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