Below are three pictures showing the changes taken place in writing letters between 1978 and 2008. Look at the pictures and writ

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问题    Below are three pictures showing the changes taken place in writing letters between 1978 and 2008. Look at the pictures and write an essay of about 120 words making reference to the following points:
   1. A description of the pictures.
   2. Your feelings about it.

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答案 It is 30 years since China carried out the reform and opening up policy. Great changes have taken place and each aspect of life can give a clear sign of the rapid development and advance in today’s China. Take people’s communication for example. In the past, our grandpas had to ask someone who could write for help when they wanted to contact their relatives or friends. As for our fathers, they kept in touch with each other by writing letters by themselves. With the development of science and technology, we can communicate with each other anytime and anywhere by sending instant messages with mobile phones. As a new generation, we are so lucky to be living in the new century. We’re proud of our country and its achievements. So we should cherish the happiness of today’s life. Meanwhile, we should put more effort and make more contributions to our beloved motherland to make it more and more powerful and more and more prosperous.

解析    第一步:审题
   1.题型:看图作文
   2.文体:论述说明文
   第二步:框架分析
   1.说明图画内容,点出要点;
   2.图画现象发生的原因以及你的感受。
   第三步:列出写作思路
   1.改革开放30年来,中国发生了翻天覆地的变化,以人们写信方式为例,说明这种变化;
   2.重点描述图画内容:爷爷那辈不识字,要写信不得不找人帮忙,父亲那一辈是自己写信,而现在,我们已经可以通过手机来联系,而不用再写信了,通过描述、比较可以知道改革开放以来,我国社会取得的巨大进步;
   3.表述自己的感觉、发出呼吁:自豪感,作贡献等。
第四步:列出关键词和词组
   the reform and opening up policy; rapid development and advance; take...for example; keep in touch with; with the development of, etc.
   第五步:落笔成文
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