Read the text below. Write an essay in about 120 words, in which you should summarize the key points of the text and make commen

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问题    Read the text below. Write an essay in about 120 words, in which you should summarize the key points of the text and make comments on them. Try to use your own words.
   Lee Rodriguez-Espada, 12, was late to the Wegmans Family 5k Sunday in Rochester, New York. To save time, her mom dropped her near the starting line before parking the car. Lee rushed to the starting line only to realize the race had already begun. She was told to just start running and quickly fell into pace with the others. Meanwhile her mom found a spot at the finish line, expecting to congratulate her daughter within the hour.
   Concentrating on running, Lee didn’ t realize until mile 4 that the finish line was nowhere in sight. Turning to another runner, she asked how much further. " That’ s when it struck me I was in the half marathon instead of the 5k," Lee said afterwards. Instead of dropping out, she decided to keep running.
   Realizing Lee wasn’t among the runners crossing the 5k finish line, her mom alerted race officials and the police. A police officer eventually found Lee on the course of the Flower City Half Marathon. The girl said she knew her family was worried but she couldn’ t quit. She needed to finish the race. And as she finally crossed the finish line, after running 10 miles more than she had planned, her mother cried tears of joy. " I see her with a medal and I thought, ’Oh my gosh, she ran the other one, like for real,’ " she said. " She decided to just keep running and not give up. " "I’m really proud," said Lee, whose next race is this weekend.

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答案 Lee Rodriguez-Espada, a 12-year-old girl, when she accidentally ran into a half marathon race, did not drop out the game, but keep running. Finally, she finished the race and won a medal. When asked, she said she decided to just keep running and not give up, which moves us greatly and makes us think deeply. It is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in the world, if you make up your mind to do it, and you will certainly accomplish your end. But in our daily life, many people give up easily for lots of reasons including hardship, money, or something else so that they cannot taste the happiness when they stick to the end and finally achieve something. Just as the saying goes, "where there is a will, there is a way," which means that if you are really resolved to do something, no matter how difficult it might be, never give up. For students, study also requires long-term hardworking. Facing with difficulties and failures, we still should keep heads up and never give up. Only in this way can we equip us with useful knowledge and have a bright future.

解析    这是一篇总结加评论式文章。这篇文章主要讲了一名12岁的女孩Lee Rodriguez-Espada在参加马拉松赛跑迟到的情况下,她没有选择放弃还是坚持参加比赛,并坚持到最后,获得了一块奖牌。由此可见,该文章的中心思想是在讲“面对困难不要放弃,坚持到最后就会获得胜利”,也可理解为“有志者事竞成”。
   在写作时,可采取常见的三段式写作,考生首先要根据题目的要求总结所给文章材料的大意,总结时要简明扼要,抓住关键的中心思想;然后,将自己从所给材料中获得的启发或者是对材料的评论作为这篇作文的主体来写,要注意语言的连贯和衔接。最后,考生还要对自己的观点进行简要总结。
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