Write a letter to your friend Zhang Ailing to convey your congratulations on her admission to Nankai University. You should

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问题 Write a letter to your friend Zhang Ailing to convey your congratulations on her admission to Nankai University.
    You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Zhang Wei" instead. Do not write the address.

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答案Dear Zhang Ailing, I am writing the letter for the purpose of conveying my heartfelt congratulations on your admission to Nankai University. I know how hard you have worked to achieve this goal. Therefore, I can imagine your excitement when you realized such an ambition. Indeed, no one could have been more deserving than you. On the other hand, for me, it is a real encouragement to see your efforts rewarded. In short, I take pride in your present success. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations. Wish you still further success. Yours truly, Zhang Wei

解析 首段只有一句,表明写作目的——祝贺对方被大学录取。第二段共五句。首句讲述对方付出的艰辛和努力。第二句和第一句是因果关系,用了连词therefore,表明对方的喜悦之情可以理解。第三句评价对方的成功是应得的。第四句表明自己也深受激励。第五旬总结自己以对方为荣。第三段共两句。首句请对方接受自己的衷心祝贺,使用了一个形容词heartfelt,意思是“衷心的”。第二句祝愿对方以后获得更大的成功,是祝贺信的经典结尾句型。
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