For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay commenting on the proverb, "No pains, no gains." You should wri

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay commenting on the proverb, "No pains, no gains." You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案 No Pains, No Gains The proverb "No pains, no gains." has long been familiar to most of us. The message it conveys is that we are supposed to make strenuous efforts whenever we attempt to succeed in a certain field. Let’s take English learning as an example. If we want to improve our English listening ability, we are required to keep on listening to different materials, both intensively and extensively, and make notes on them from time to time. Another good case in point is acrobatics. All of us feel excited when acrobats win grand prizes in international competitions, but who knows how many hardships they have endured? Nobody is born a good acrobat, and one can only become a skilled acrobat after countless failures. Judging from the examples given above, we may safely come to the conclusion that no pains, no gains. So why not stop idling about but try our best to learn our majors well? I am convinced that we will gradually become experienced and skillful as long as we do not give up and keep making efforts.

解析     本文要求围绕“不劳则无获”这一谚语展开论述。第一段简述谚语“不劳则无获”的含义。
    第二段举例论证,说明勤奋刻苦的重要性。
    第三段接着以杂技为例,使论证更加充分。All of us feel excited when acrobats win grandprizes in international competitions,but who knows how many hardships they have endured?是对作者观点的有力论证,尤其是who knows how many hardships they have endured丰富了文章的语言表达,指出一个世人皆知的真理:台上十分钟,台下十年功。
    最后一段在以上论证的基础上,用we may safely come to the conclusion that...总结全文,提出自己的观点和建议。
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