You are asked to write an essay on the following topic: Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be

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问题     You are asked to write an essay on the following topic:
    Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
    You should write at least 250 words.
    You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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答案 On Competition and Cooperation In our society, competition is a common phenomenon. When it comes to competition and cooperation, some people always emphasize competition but neglect cooperation. It is often believed that competition and cooperation are in opposition to each other. Their reasons are as following. To begin with, they believe only competition can help them defeat their counterparts; in addition, they think competition is the only way to lead to success. But some others hold different opinion. They think cooperation is as important as competition. They advocate cooperation whatever they do. They are of the opinion that the dependence of people on one another has increased, without which the society we live in can not keep going smoothly. They base their opinion on the following reasons: on one hand, cooperation can build trust between each other and help to bring long-term relationship; on the other hand, cooperation can turn a small and weak business into a big and strong one. As far as I’m concerned, I do not agree with the view that competition and cooperation are always in conflict with each other. In my opinion, while advocating competition, we should never forget cooperation. In our social life, cooperation is especially necessary because most work is fulfilled with or through other people. So I’ve come to the conclusion that cooperation is equally important. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that both competition and cooperation are essential to success and thus should be emphasized at the same time.

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