For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Voluntary Blood Donation following the outline given b

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Voluntary Blood Donation following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
    1.有些人支持义务献血
    2.有些人对此持消极态度
    3.我的看法

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答案 Voluntary Blood Donation There is a heated debate over voluntary blood donation. It is commonly accepted that donating blood is a glorious and noble act. For one thing, the supply of blood is always limited. So it is urgent and necessary to have the blood bank filled in case of an emergency. For another, helping those who are in need is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. In contrast, others claim that donating blood has nothing to do with them. They point out that a person’s blood is both limited and precious, and it is very important to one’s health. If they donate their blood to others, it is very likely to do harm to their own bodies. As for me, I hold the belief that donating blood is great. The society needs its members to share kindness and love with each other. It is advisable that everyone should make a contribution to society to make it better and better.

解析     第一段首先提出人们对义务献血这件事存在分歧。多数人支持义务献血,因为这是既光荣又高尚的事情。血库的存血量有限,有必要充实血库以防发生紧急情况。此外,帮助有困难的人也是中国人的传统美德。
    第二段指出有些人认为献血和他们无关,献血对身体有害。本段含有宾语从句、条件状语从句等,句式多变,结构紧凑,增强了表达效果。
    第三段表达个人观点,献血很伟大。我们的社会需要爱,只有人人奉献,社会才能更美好。
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