For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on preparation by referring to the saying "By failing to prepare, yo

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on preparation by referring to the saying "By failing to prepare, you are preparing to fail." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will prepare to avoid failure. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 There goes a famous saying, "By failing to prepare, you are preparing to fail." It is indicated in the remark that the importance of preparation can never be underestimated. If one doesn’t get well prepared before taking action, chances are good that he/she will be doomed to fail. Getting ready is the secret to success. If you don’t develop adequate abilities, gather enough experience or prepare yourself mentally, you can hardly succeed. The sports world abounds in examples which demonstrate this point. Li Na, the greatest Chinese female tennis player, had practiced hard for many years and played countless matches both at home and abroad and suffered so many losses before she won the championships in the French Open and the Australian Open. James Harden, one of the NBA talents, used to be a bench player for the Thunder, but years of preparation made him the backbone of the Rockets. As a college student, in order to avoid failure in the future, what I can do is to make full use of everyday. In other words, I will master as many core skills and knowledge as possible, and get myself ready for my future career.

解析     这是一篇引语分析型作文。首先要求考生就“不做准备,那就准备失败”这句名言做出评论,并提出自己的观点;其次要求考生列举例子来阐述自己的观点;最后要求考生陈述自己可以如何准备以避免失败。根据题目要求,文章的结构可安排如下:
第一段:简单评述名言,亮明观点:
第二段:举例论证观点:
第三段:讲述自己会怎样做准备以避免失败。
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