Aging is now one of the biggest challenges our society is facing. Experts in various fields put forward their proposals to solve

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问题     Aging is now one of the biggest challenges our society is facing. Experts in various fields put forward their proposals to solve this problem. As a responsible young man, you definitely want to help deal with the problem. Write a composition of about 400 words to state your idea on what we should do now to handle the problem.
    In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support your thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
    You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 What to Do Now for the Future Aging Society China, the world’s most populous country, is now crowned with another title: one of the world’s most rapidly aging nations. According to statistics from the National Population and Family Planning Commission (NPFPC), the country’s top population policy-maker, citizens who are 65 or older have already accounted for 7.1 per cent of the overall population at the end of 2001. This figure is expected to shoot up dramatically in decades ahead, and some predictions indicate the proportion of aged people will surge to 24 per cent by 2050. Therefore, it is obvious that we should do something right now to cope with the problem. In my opinion, there are several things we need to do. China must bolster its inadequate social security and healthcare systems, which are poorly funded at present. Although China began to establish the social security system in 1997, the system is still far from perfection. Without a sufficient pension system, senior citizens will not have the sense of security for the rest of their lives. Life expectancy is expected to rise as medical advances continue and living standards improve, the elderly who believe they are obliged to receive support may increase greatly. Without a viable pension system, problems are certain to arise. Besides improving the current frail social security system, other options are also available to tackle looming problems. As a developing country with low productivity, investment in human resources should be enhanced. In this way the rising productivity could, to some extent, offset the negative impact of the declining labour forces. At the same time, the government should modify the current family planning policy to change social and economic conditions of the nation. To sum up, in order to deal with these circumstances and create a society in which people can enjoy true happiness throughout their lives, it is necessary to constantly review and revise social systems relating to employment, pensions, medical care, welfare, education, social involvement and living environments so as to adapt them to the society. To achieve this goal, both the national government and local governments, as well as corporations, local communities, households and individuals, must cooperate with one another and work actively to achieve our goal.

解析 第一部分(首段)从中国的人口现状以及未来的预测入手,指出老龄化社会即将到来,表明应该未雨绸缪的观点。第二部分(二、三段)重点说明如何解决老龄化问题,现在要做的事情就是完善社会养老保险制度。第三部分(第四段)简单提出一些应该着手解决的问题。
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