For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the pi

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on The Lonely Life of Aged People. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案 The Lonely Life of Aged People (1) Above is a thought-provoking cartoon: an old grandma sits in front of a mirror, looking at "herself in the mirror and saying to herself, "I feel lonely when my son is at work and my grandson studies in school." (2) Apparently, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the significance of children’s company for old parents: if elderly people intend to enjoy happiness, it is advisable for their children to spend more time with their parents. (3) In modern society, young people have become busier with their work. (4) Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it hard to have spare time to accompany lonely parents. (5) However, they may not know that company enables aged parents to build up adequate enthusiasm for life. (6) As a matter of fact, young people in large numbers have not come to realize the loneliness of aged parents. (7) As a young man, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to accompany aged parents, no matter how busy we are. Accordingly, we should advocate and encourage our acquaintances to love, respect and care all elderly people.

解析 (1)首句引出图画,然后描述图画内容,主要体现四个方面:人物、动作、文字和环境。
(2)图画联系主题,后面的if句为图画简单评论。
(3)阐述图画现象产生的原因。
(4)写出年轻人对此很难应对。
(5)通过转折论述意义。
(6)尾句是万能总结。
(7)写出自己对该问题的看法。
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