Most e-shops are run by young people. Some college students also try to open e-shops in order to earn some money and get some so

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问题     Most e-shops are run by young people. Some college students also try to open e-shops in order to earn some money and get some social experience. Different people have different opinions on this matter. What’s your opinion? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic:
    Should College Students Open E-shops?
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
    In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 Should College Students Open E-shops? Young people are no strangers to e-shops prevalent in the age of ecommerce Some of them even run e-shops to get more involved in this larger trend of cyber economy. I, however, do not think college students should open e-shops. First of all, running an e-shop requires a lot of time and efforts, which could be better spent for learning purposes. Unlike a regularly scheduled tutoring job, operating an e-shop means hours and hours of dealing with (potential) buyers and even rounds of intense negotiation about the price and mailing arrangement. Students could not afford to lose the already precious and limited time simply for gaining some working experiences and money. Secondly, running an e-shop requires trading skills and fiscal knowledge. Some students, acting on the impulse of "being their own bosses", are ignorant of financial risks and might end up in heavy debts. A wiser choice is to take some courses about trades, finance and asset management When they graduate with full understanding of economic basics, they are ready to face and manage risks. By then, they are able to run an e-shop based on knowledge, rather than sheer luck. In conclusion, college students should spend their valuable time on absorbing knowledge. To lower the risk of business failure, college students should be equipped themselves before they dive into the ever-changing ocean of e-commerce.

解析     本题属于“立场选择型”作文。涉及的题材是“校园学习”。该题要求考生对“大学生应否开网店”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    第一段:从电子商务时代入题,指出大学生不应该开网店。
    第二段:阐述原因。第一,经营网店需要大量的时间和精力,这些时间和精力最好还是花在学习上;第二,开网店需要交易技巧和财务知识。大学生凭一时冲动开网店会冒很大的风险。
    第三段:重申观点——大学生应该先学习技能,然后再下海做电子商务的生意。
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