Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, your should (1)interpret the chart, and (2)give your comment. You

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问题 Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, your should
(1)interpret the chart, and
(2)give your comment.
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET 2.(15 points)

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答案 Big Expenses during Spring Festival Spring Festival is a happy season. It is also a moment for big expenses, as the chart indicates. Residents in this city spend 40% of the money on gifts for their family and friends. 20% of the expenses go to the cost for traffic. Partying for dinner costs them another 20%. And the rest money is spent for various other purposes. How should we account for this allocation of expenses? On one hand, it is attributable to their improved financial conditions. Most city families are now rich enough to spend much money on things other than basic living necessities. On the other hand, it is closely related to the change in people’s lifestyle or attitude. They feel happier and also want to make other people happier than ever. Last but not least, Spring Festival is supposedly the most important occasion for us Chinese people in a year. So they are willing to spend money as they wish. With the data and possible causes in mind, I have good reason to believe that people in this city will go on following the trend in the years to come. That is really strong evidence of our good living conditions and social stability. As a Chinese, I feel cheerful, optimistic and truly inspired.

解析     第一段是数据的描述。一开始说春节是开心的时节,但马上指出春节也是花大钱的时刻,目的就是引出下面数据的描述。三个数据的描述所使用的动词和句型都不一样,但也都是考生应该很熟悉的表达方式。
    第二段是分析原因。有三点:第一是归结于改善了的经济条件,使得大部分城市居民可以把很多钱花在非生活必需品上;第二点就是人们的生活方式和态度发生变化了,他们自己开心,也想让别人开心,买礼物和聚会吃饭不都是为了这个目的吗?最后就是春节对于我们中国人来说是一年中最重要的时刻,此时不花钱何时花?
    第三段是总结。依据数据和提出的原因作出展望,认为有很好的理由相信这个城市的居民在来年还会沿袭这个趋势,这表明我们国家生活条件改善,社会稳定。作为一名中国人,我感到开心、乐观和深受鼓舞。
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