Directions: Study the following picture carefully and write an essay on the topic: Students’ life. Write your essay according to

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问题    Directions: Study the following picture carefully and write an essay on the topic: Students’ life. Write your essay according to the following outline:
   (1) State what the situation is.
   (2) Problems of this practice.
   (3) Give your opinion.
   You should write approximately 160—200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

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答案 As can be seen in the picture, nowadays students’ learning burden is too great, just like birds in cages. They lose their valuable freedom, can’t do what they want to do. All they have to do is study, both in school days and on holiday. In school days they have to work hard at school, while on holiday they still have no free time, because they have to attend various additional classes. Such treatment to children will lead to various problems. They have no time of their own, then gradually they will lose the ability to arrange their own time. Everything has to be arranged by others. And because they are always learning, someday they may become tired of learning. And this will make creativity has no place to display. I think we will give students their free time back. We should allow them the time to fly freely in the sky. So whether attending additional classes or not should be up to their own choices. No one should decide everything for them, treating them just as birds in the cages.

解析    第一步:审题
   1.题型:漫画作文    2.文体:议论文
   第二步:框架分析
   1.一般文章格式    2.点出每个要点
   第三步:列出写作思路
   1.说明图画含义    2.加以引申    3.总结自己的看法
   第四步:列出关键词和词组
   as can be seen in the picture; learning burden is too great; just like birds in cages; all they have to do is study; both in school days and on holiday; attend various additional classes; lead to various problems; have no time of their own; lose the ability to arrange their own time; become tired of learning; give students their free time back, etc.
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