Some people say that rich parents are more powerful than diploma in China. Is it really the case? Look at the following picture

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问题     Some people say that rich parents are more powerful than diploma in China. Is it really the case? Look at the following picture carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should start with a brief description of the picture and give your view on the issue.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 The Competition of Diploma or Parents? As can be seen in the picture, two young men are getting ready on the starting line for a race. One, who is a bit fat, is crouching on the top of his parents’ luxurious car. The other, who wears a square college cap, is lashed to a cart, on which sit his poor parents. This picture intends to satirize that a rich father might be more powerful than a degree in contemporary China. As far as I am concerned, young people should owe their success to their competence rather than to their parents. To begin with, young people can not depend on their parents all their life. Without competence in work, they will fail to find their feet in society. Moreover, competent young people usually dare to go into competition with others. Though fierce or even cut-throat, the competition will make them better improve themselves, surpass themselves, and succeed eventually, while those who depend on their wealthy parents may not even be able to capture the real meaning of success. To sum up, young people should not treat their parents’ support and shelter as the anchor of success. Instead, they should work hard to achieve their own success and be a self-made man.

解析     这幅图刻画了两名有着不同的学历和家庭背景的年轻人在起跑线上准备赛跑的情景。一位依靠父母的财势蓄力待发;另一位尽管拿到了高学历,却要拖着板车上的父母与别人赛跑。图片旨在讨论学历与家庭背景对孩子参与社会竞争的影响。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可以安排如下:
    第一段简要描绘图片,并指出图片的意图:讽刺当今中国,一个富有的爸爸可能比拥有学位还管用。   
    第二段提出个人看法:年轻人应该靠个人实力而不是靠拼爹娘来获取成功。其一,年轻人不可能一辈子都受到父母的关照。其二,凭借实力加入竞争的行列,才能更好地完善自己,超越自己,最终获取成功。
    第三段总结全文。
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