Directions: Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your

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问题 Directions:
    Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
    1) interpret the chart, and
    2) give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words.

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答案 The bar chart shows the different options considered as the most important thing in life by the respondents. As can be seen, health, picked by 39.2% of the respondents, is the favorite choice, followed by family (19.5%) and bosom friends (16.4%). The least favorite choice is oneself (4.9%) and the second least is knowledge (11.8%). It is interesting to note that health is predominantly popular among the respondents, suggesting that they place more value on physical well-being of their life, as opposite to the less popular choice of knowledge, an indicator of intellectual well-being. According to the survey results, one could deduce that the respondents may be in the lower levels of Maslow’s hierarchy of needs, which believes physiological needs are the most basic ones of a person’s life. I think this should raise the government’s attention to provide a better safety net, thereby easing citizen’s concerns on their health issues and enabling more people to move up to higher levels of needs.

解析 该图表显示了受访者对人生最重要的东西的看法。从图表可见,较多受访者选择的是健康和家庭,而较少选择自己和知识。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
第一段描述柱状图。
第二段提出个人看法:根据马斯洛的需求层次理论,指出受访者很可能处于较低的需求层次。
第三段提出建议:政府需要加大保障力度,使人们能有更高的追求。
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