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  3. Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: Some of your classmates think that more pressure from academic st

Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: Some of your classmates think that more pressure from academic st

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问题 Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic:
Some of your classmates think that more pressure from academic studies is not beneficial to students. You either agree or disagree with them.
                         　　　    MORE PRESSURE FROM ACADEMIC
                           STUDIES DOES (OR DOES NO) GOOD TO US
You are to write in three paragraphs.
In the first paragraph, state clearly what your view is.
In the second paragraph, support your view with details.
In the last paragraph, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion with a summary or suggestion.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy . Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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答案 More Pressure from Academic Studies Does Good to Us 　　 Last Friday, the teacher of spoken English had us discuss the effect of pressure from academic studies on us students. Some of my classmates maintained that it would not be beneficial if the pressure increased. I did not side with this view for two reasons. First, pressure is a necessary driving force. As society grows more and more competitive, college students must live up to future challenges foreseeable even today. Under pressure, each student must work hard. The good learners will try to take the lead, whereas the low achievers will do their utmost to catch up. Second, the pressure that exists among our students is far from sufficient. The teachers do give assignments from time to time, yet they have failed to keep the students busy enough. Quite a few of us idle away their time by playing video games, seeing films, watching TV, or playing cards. All these do not merely happen on weekends. By introducing more academic pressure into our life, the school can minimize the possibility of our doing wrong things. In summary, I believe more pressure from academic studies does a great deal of good to us college students. It is not that fearsome as some of us assume. Putting it in the right perspective, none of us will break or collapse.
解析 1．写三段，字数150字左右。  时间35分钟。
2．第一段：针对一些同学认为增加学习压力会对学生不利的观点，明确给出自己的观点，要么同意他们的看法，要么不同意，二者只居其一。第二段：给出具体理由来支持所取观点。第三段：简要总结前面的讨论，或提出建议。
3．文体为议论文，通过评论别人的观点，阐述自己的观点。
4．在论述本题时不应脱离作为评论对象的观点。
[写作提纲]
第1段：先引出话题(如课堂讨论学习压力对学生的影响问题，一些同学提出某个自己不赞同的看法)，再提出自己的观点。
第2段：陈述两大理由，说明为什么自己持相反的观点(如压力是一种必不可少的动力来源，目前学生的压力并不够大)。
第3段：(用不同的语言表达方式)重申自己的观点，总结上面的讨论，并适当引申(如指出正确对待压力就不会压垮我们)。
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