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  3. Fake products are very harmful, but they still enjoy great popularity. They have brought about a lot of social problems. Why can

Fake products are very harmful, but they still enjoy great popularity. They have brought about a lot of social problems. Why can

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问题    Fake products are very harmful, but they still enjoy great popularity. They have brought about a lot of social problems. Why can they get so widespread? What harmful effect can they bring to people? How to solve this problem? Choose one or two aspects to talk about it.
   Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
   The Harmful Effects of Fake Products
   Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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答案 The Harmful Effects of Fake Products Nowadays, China is suffering from the boom of fake commodities. Fake products are so widespread in the market that almost everybody has the frustrating experience of buying one. Then, what harm do they bring to us? On the one hand, fake products do harm to individual consumers. They can bring about great loss in both people’s property and life. For example, bad seeds result in bankruptcy of farmers. And another case in point is that if a consumer buys fake medicine, it won’t cure him of his illness but may threaten his life. On the other hand, the production of fake commodities is a great danger to our society in many ways. Firstly, the good reputation of a well-known product may be ruined overnight by fake products. Secondly, fake products, usually associated with organized crime and backed up by powerful multilayered corrupt bureaucrats, may cause chaos and ruin our society. Since fake products do great harm to individual consumers and to our society, it is high time that we did something to avoid being the victims of fake goods. Every one of us has the duty to fight against fake products.
解析    开头部分
   首先点明当今的社会现状，然后使用疑问句承前启后：假冒商品给我们带来了什么危害?很好地吸引了读者的注意力。
   中间部分
   1)用On the one hand，…和On the other hand，…从两个方面分析了假冒商品的危害。
   2)在提及第二点时，作者分别使用了Firstly，…和Secondly，…进行列举，结构清晰，层次分明。
   结尾部分
   1)呼吁全社会采取行动杜绝假冒商品。
   2)虚拟语气(it is high time that)的使用加强了紧迫感，颇具说服力。
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