For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Voice Your Opinion by commenting on the saying, "Silence is

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Voice Your Opinion by commenting on the saying, "Silence is golden." You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 Voice Your Opinion The old proverb that "Silence is golden." is certainly true in many circumstances. Indeed, silence is considered one of the many attributes a person possesses. However, it is not always golden, especially in our modern society. Firstly, silence may dull our sense of righteousness. It is a shame to keep silent when we see our friends being bullied or a stranger’s wallet being stolen. When our rights are violated, silence and tolerance will make things worse. Secondly, it may ruin our best chance of getting promotion or achieving success. If we keep silent and are afraid to express ourselves, we will lose the precious opportunities to show our talent and ability. Besides, silence is not golden when one needs to claim responsibility or when the one we love is expecting our response. Therefore, when the situation calls for it, we should no longer remain silent. Tell people what we think and how we feel, and then we’ll have ourselves understood.

解析     这是一篇议论文,讨论了当今社会应信奉“沉默是金”,还是应表达意愿。
    第一段先承认“沉默是金”有其合理之处,也被认为是人的一种优秀品质,而后However笔锋一转,指出“沉默是金”并非完全适用于当今社会。
    第二段对引言进行评论,从三个方面论证保持沉默的不良后果。第一,沉默会麻木我们的正义感。It is a shame to keep silent when we see our friends being bullied or a stranger’s walletbeing stolen.中It为形式主语,when引导时间状语从句,句式多变。第二,沉默让我们错失成功的良机,失去展示自己能力的机会。第三,在责任感面前,沉默不是金。
    第三段总结全文。说出来自己的观点,让别人知道我们的所思所想。
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