For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled An Unforgettable Picnic. You should write at least 120

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled An Unforgettable Picnic. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1. 简述一次与朋友或同学难忘的野餐
2.描述当时野餐的情况
3.谈谈自己的感受和体会

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答案 An Unforgettable Picnic Last Sunday my classmates and I went on an unforgettable picnic. Our plan was to climb up a hill in the suburbs. We gathered at the school gate at 7 a. in. The weather was fine and it seemed to be a pleasant day for an outing. To our disappointment, it began to rain all of a sudden when we arrived at the destination. Fortunately, there was a gloriette. Our monitor advised us to have the picnic in it. It was a good idea and we started the preparation. While enjoying the delicious food, we breathed the sweet air and were attracted by the beauty of the hill in the rain. Our singing and laughter lingered around the hill. On the way back, we were all exhausted, but each of us had a joyful heart and this impressive picnic will be stored in our memory.

解析     这是一篇比较典型的记叙文。写作时注意情节描写始终要围绕中心思想“难忘的野餐”展开,要交代清楚五个方面的内容,即:时间、地点、人物、事件以及原因,即英文中的when,where,who,what和 why,要选择生动的事例和细节,恰当安排写作顺序。在布局上,按照提纲的要求展开写作即可。
    第一段简单描述一次与朋友或同学难忘的野餐;
    第二段描述当时野餐的情况;
    第三段谈谈自己的感受和体会。
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