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The Independent Writing Task Writing Based on Knowledge and Experience Directions For this task, you will write an essay in

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问题     The Independent Writing Task
Writing Based on Knowledge and Experience Directions
    For this task, you will write an essay in response to a question that asks you to state, explain, and support your opinion on an issue. You have 30 minutes to complete your essay. Typically, an effective essay contains a minimum of 300 words. Your essay will be judged on the quality of your writing. This includes the development of your ideas, the organization of the essay, and the quality and accuracy of the language you use. In the real test, if you finish your essay before the allotted time is up, you may click the Continue icon to end this section.
    Question
    Directions: Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write and revise your essay. Typically, an effective essay will be at least 300 words long.
    Question:
    A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory in your community.
    Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.
    Do you oppose or support the factory? Explain your position.
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答案 The new factory could help the community because it will bring more jobs and people to the city. These increases in money and population will help the city grow. However, there may also be some problems. Factories can cause pollution, which would adversely affect the people around it. In most cases, the arrival of a new factory can help a community. For example, it can create a number of short-and long-term jobs. There will be a need for workers as the factory is being built. Once the factory is completed, many people can be hired to work in it. This will help the entire community. In some cases, though, factories cause more problems than they solve. Depending on what is being produced, factories can release dangerous chemicals into the local environment. These chemicals can have different effects, including the destruction of area wildlife as well as an increase in the number and types of illnesses residents suffer from. There are situations where entire towns had to be closed down because the air, water, and ground had become too polluted. It is true that the local government can keep an eye on the factory and its emissions, but in a small community the government usually does not have the staff and money required to do a thorough job. I am against the idea of a factory being built in my community. Although there are some benefits, they are outweighed by the possible problems. It is not one hundred percent certain that the factory will harm the community, but because the problems are so serious - including pollution that could lead to illness and death - it is not worth the risk.
解析     根据给出的主题写出自己的观点，时间是30分钟。在写作之前先要列出文章的大纲。在草稿纸上列出序论、本论和结论怎样展开，要写出有哪些观点，每个观点又要列举什么样的例子或者理由等详细内容。在写完文章之后，应该留出4—5分钟的时问来修改、删除和增加内容。本题提问的是对于在自己生活的地区建工厂所带来的影响及其优缺点，以及对这种构想是赞成还是反对。在写之前，首先要确定文章要表达的观点，也就是说是赞成建工厂还是反对。并且要将建工厂的优点和缺点都列举出来，分析利弊之后做出决定。
    参考答案分别说明了建设工厂的优缺点。优点是可以解决更多人的就业，缺点是污染环境。第一段分别介绍了优缺点，用however来转换，暗示了反对建工厂的想法。建设工厂可以带来更多的就业机会，增加人口和收入，可是对居民所带来的危害就是污染问题。第二段里对第一段里的观点举例进行了详细说明。
    首先，建设工厂和工厂完工的时候都需要大量人手，会给地区就业带来很大帮助。第三段列举了建设工厂的缺点，以排放化学物质为例，导致野生动物灭亡和给人们带来疾病。在这部分中，笔者反对建设工厂，并举了一个例子说明污染问题的严重性，即，如果污染严重，可能会导致整个地区荒废。在这里还指出了监管污染问题体系的局限性，提供了反对建设工厂的确凿证据。最后一段得出的结论是：虽然建设工厂有一些好处，但是其潜在的危险太大，因此反对建设工厂。
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