The following chart shows the negative influences on left-behind children caused by parents’ absence from home. Look at the foll

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问题     The following chart shows the negative influences on left-behind children caused by parents’ absence from home. Look at the following picture carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should start with a brief description of the picture, explain its implied meaning, and give your view on the issue.

    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 Left-Behind Children The chart reveals the negative effects on children caused by parents’ absence from home. As can be seen, the most voiced concern is that children’s study outcomes will suffer, with 47% of the respondents believing this is the case. This is followed by children’s psychological problems (27%) and life problems (25%). Other less frequently expressed concerns include children’s insufficient interpersonal skills (13%) and a sense of insecurity (10%). Informed by the survey results, one could understand the extent to which children are unfavorably impacted when parents are not around. Based on the results, it is not difficult to explain why left-behind children tend to underachieve at school. Without parents’ guidance, it’s hard for children to learn from good examples, and they are more likely to get distracted from study and misbehave. Given the negative effects, parents are advised to put their children before their business, but not the other way around. To parents, no achievement would be greater than their kid’s healthy growth.

解析     该图表显示了父母在外工作对孩子造成的负面影响。从图表可见,比较多的受访者认为会对孩子的学习、心理和生活方面带来影响。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
    第一段:描述图表。
    第二段:解释父母“模范作用”的重要性。
    第三段:提出建议,发出呼吁。
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