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Some people say that opportunity is the key element for success. For example, there is a popular story that Newton was sitting u

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问题     Some people say that opportunity is the key element for success. For example, there is a popular story that Newton was sitting under an apple tree, an apple fell on his head (more likely near him) , and he suddenly thought of the Universal Law of Gravitation. How would you comment on this?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    On Opportunity and Success
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答案 On Opportunity and Success Reading lots of history books, I find that the world’s most successful people unanimously admit that their success depends much on opportunities. And there are also talented people who are unable to achieve success because they are just denied by any opportunity. Therefore, I begin to think that opportunity is the road to success. When an opportunity comes, it brings promise for success, but that promise never comes true by its own. The popular story of how Newton was hit by a falling apple and thus found the Universal Law of Gravitation also proves this. I suppose many people before Newton saw apples fall, but none found anything about gravity. However, Newton took the opportunity to think about the phenomenon further, propose and demonstrate a theory to explain it. This indicates that you must make efforts before, during and after you get an opportunity. Thus, when it is coming, you can recognize it; when it is there, you can grasp it; when it is in your hand, you can turn it into success. Success is opportunity observed, opportunity taken. If you want to be successful in your life, you have to be an opportunist. If you see this life as an opportunity for success, an opportunity to be content, take it.
解析     本题是一个自由发挥型题目，根据牛顿受到从树上掉落的苹果的启发得出万有引力定律的故事，要求考生对问题进行分析和评论，提出并论证自己对机遇和成功的看法。
    我们可以从多方面去探讨机遇和成功的关系，重点抓住其中一个方面，以因果论证和例证相结合的方式展开说明。这里给出三个可能的思路供参考：
    思路1：机遇对成功非常重要，但是机遇不等于成功。
    机遇只是增加了获得成功的可能性，只有加上不懈的努力，可能性才会成为现实。结合例子：很多人也看到了苹果落地，却只有牛顿进行了思考和验证，发现了举世闻名的万有引力定律。
    思路2：首先肯定机遇是成功的必要条件，但是机遇并不经常造访。
    如果想获得成功就不能让机遇悄然而逝。我们应该重视机遇，首先认识机遇、把握机遇，做好充分准备，才能走向成功。所以，成功与否，主要在于如何看待机遇。结合例子：苹果落地就是一个机遇，可是大多数人认识不到，只有像牛顿这样勤于思考，具有丰富知识的人才可能把这不起眼的事件当成机遇。
    思路3：成功和机遇是相辅相成的。
    机遇带来成功，成功也带来机遇。更形象的说法就是：成功和机遇离得很近，找到机遇，你就找到了成功之路；找到成功，你就找到了更多机遇。就牛顿而言，当苹果落地时，他发现了机遇，也就给自己带来了成功。他的这次成功又帮助他发现了其他的一些定律。
    范文采取了思路1来说明成功和机遇的关系。
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