With the development of society, more and more ordinary people are engaged in charity activities. Accordingly, a new form of cha

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问题     With the development of society, more and more ordinary people are engaged in charity activities. Accordingly, a new form of charity comes into being, that is, micro-charity, by which ordinary people can take practical action or donate a small amount of money to express their kindness. What is your view on micro-charity?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
                                 My View on Micro-charity
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 My View on Micro-charity With the improvement of society and people’s living standards, more and more ordinary people are engaged in a new form of charity—micro-charity, which wins overwhelming support and benefits a lot of people. Micro-charity has emerged as a shining star in charity activities. It encourages ordinary people to explore those small demands of other people which are easily ignored. Besides, compared with the traditional form of charity, micro-charity is totally a grass-roots charity which relies on ordinary people. Furthermore, micro-charity not only encourages people to find others’ demands but also allows people to participate in charity to express their love and kindness. With its new concepts, micro-charity has its own advantages. Firstly, it is quite a convenient and easy way for people to involve themselves in charity since it lowers the threshold for charity participation. Secondly, micro-charity can draw a lot of attention through microblogs and other net platforms. Online charity information can be disseminated rapidly and widely. Lastly, it can put together all possible resources to solve problems, which makes charity sustainable. All these advantages make it possible to get people together, and as a group, they can help others more easily and finally help our society make progress. To sum up, with its specific concepts and obvious advantages, micro-charity makes people see how easily they can achieve their personal value through performing good deeds instead of considering charity work as reserved for the rich. In a word, micro-charity will surely help make a better world.

解析     本题是开放性题目,要求考生就当前备受关注的微公益现象发表自己的看法。随着社会的进步和人们生活水平的提高,越来越多的普通人开始参与到公益事业中来,于是“微公益”应运而生。题目要求考生对微公益提出自己的看法,可以从微公益的理念和微公益的优点来进行讨论。
    开头部分开篇引出话题:随着社会的发展和人们生活水平的提高,一种新的公益形式——“微公益”应运而生,并得到很多支持,使很多人受益。
    中间部分阐述微公益的理念。首先指出微公益是公益事业的一种新形式,接着从三方面来阐述微公益的理念。阐述微公益的优点。运用了总一分一总结构,首先用一句话过渡到微公益的优点,接着分别用“Firstly…” “Secondly…”和“Lastly…”从三个方面阐述微公益的优点,最后用一句话作为该部分的总结。
    结尾部分重申观点,对全文进行总结。
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