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Today, more and more college students are indulged in network games. Network games are so harmful that some of them play truant,

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问题     Today, more and more college students are indulged in network games. Network games are so harmful that some of them play truant, others even commit a crime for one reason or another. What do you think of this problem? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic:
                                    Network Games
    In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
    Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.
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答案 Network Games Nowadays Internet games have become very popular on campus. I am impressed most that many of my roommates often spend their evenings, sometimes even a whole night, playing such games. They concentrate all their attention on them, with their hands busy operating. Obviously network games give them great pleasure and satisfaction. But if we take a broader perspective, we may find that network games have had many negative impacts on us. First of all, for most students, playing network games is an enormous waste of time and money. As a student, we are supposed to concentrate our attention on our studies. However, some students spend 4 or even 5 hours a day on it, consequently, they will have little time for their study. At the same time they have to pay 5 or 10 Yuan for that a day. It’s very dangerous for a college student, because he may try various illegal means to get money. Besides, those who play Internet games day and night will be harmed both physically and mentally for lack of rest and sleep. Some teenagers, especially school children, spend too much time playing them, which certainly do harm to their health and eyes and affect their school achievements, They become slow and unresponsive, and what’s worse, they lose their tempers easily and over-react to situations. If one completely immerses himself in the unreal world and distance himself from his classmates and friends, he will end up feeling lonely and isolated in the real world. Thirdly, and the most serious result is that many of these games are about violence amt are not good for our spiritual development. One of the dangers of games is that some people attempt to translate the rules of a game onto reality. For a long time, people have been growing concerned that children and teenagers occasionally imitate violence which they saw on the screen. For example, death is fun on a computer game, and unstable teenagers who "zap" people in computer games without punishment by law most likely to forget the value of life in real world. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that network games have in a large sense caused crime rates to rise not only because of their destructive influence on young men’s morality, but also because of their vicious effect on their behavior. Therefore, I strongly hold that college students should keep away from internet games, at the same time, the government should censor them more strictly.
解析     本文开篇指出网络游戏在大学校园很流行，引出话题。然后笔锋一转，指出游戏在给他们带来快乐的同时，也给他们带来许多不容忽视的负面影响。
    正文部分从三个层面进行分析，first of all, besides, thirdly等关联词的使用使文章思路很清晰。首先，网络游戏浪费了学生大量的时间和金钱。其次，网络游戏使学生的身心健康受到损害。长期沉迷于游戏的学生，会对他们的身体造成伤害，会使他们反映迟钝、易怒，偏激，同时也会使他们远离朋友而感到孤单。第三个后果，同时也是最严重的后果，网络游戏大多与暴力相关，游戏规则一旦被应用到现实世界中，会导致那些沉浸在游戏中的学生忘掉现实中生命的价值，而犯下不可饶恕的错误。三种后果依严重程度一一道来，给读者以很深刻的触动。
    结论段，作者指出网络游戏因其对学生思想意识以及行为方面的负面影响，在很大程度上导致犯罪率的上升。所以在号召学生远离网络游戏的同时，政府应加强对网络游戏的监管。全文首尾照应，论述有利，观点鲜明。
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