Write off the following topic: Piracy You are to write in three paragraphs: In the first paragraph, state clearly that w

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问题     Write off the following topic: Piracy
    You are to write in three paragraphs:
    In the first paragraph, state clearly that we are facing the social problem of piracy.
    In the second paragraph, state the damages that piracy will cause to society.
    In the last paragraph, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion with your advice on counter-measures.
    You should write about 160-200 words neatly.

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答案 Piracy "Piracy" means the publishing, reproducing of a book, CD, VCD, tape, etc. without permission. Since the originals are too expensive, especially for the working class or students, they always prefer the piracies. As a matter of fact, piracy has been such a serious social problem in China nowadays that no one can ignore it. Though piracy enables the books, CDs, VCDs or tapes to be available to our society. It is harmful to our society. First, piracy violates the intellectual property right in that both the authors and the publishers may suffer big losses. Second, it gives rise to low quality books, CDs, etc. and there is no way to trace the sources. Finally, piracy damages our image, which puts our country in a disadvantageous position in international negotiations. With China’s entry into the World Trade Organization(WTO), cracking down on piracy has been put on the agenda. In my view, laws must be improved in accordance with new situations and on the other hand, the government has a lot to do to make the natives aware of the damages of piracy to the society.

解析     根据标题和写作提纲可确定这是一篇说明性的文章。第一段可首先提出盗版作为一种社会现象发生的原因;第二段则举例说明盗版对社会造成的危害;结论部分可提出解决问题的措施。以上三层意思也形成了各段的主题句:第一段"As a matter of fact,piracy has been such a serious social problem in China nowadays that no one can ignore it";第二段,"Though...it’s essentially not a good thing to our society";第三段,"...cracking down on piracy has been put on the agenda".基本框架确定后,可分别对主题句进行扩展。第一段引出论题可简要解释什么叫盗版及人们买盗版产品的原因(the originals are too expensive);第二段谈盗版的危害时,可重点展开,intellectual property right,low-quality books,image均可作为支撑点;最后一段谈解决方案,自然会想到法律的完善和提高民众的忧患意识。当然好的文章还应注意行文前后连贯,浑然一体。
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