Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly,

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问题     Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
    1. describe the drawing briefly,
    2. interpret its intended meaning, and then
    3. give your comments.
    You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
   

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答案 The new family planning policy—allowing all couples to have two children—is considered a mixed blessing. As the picture depicts, jubilant and eager, an eligible young couple push the gate open, setting out on the road to second child-bearing. In contrast, another young couple, with four aged parents to support, hesitate to conceive another baby. To increase the country’s fertility rate and offset the burden of an aging society, China has loosened its one-child policy introduced in the early 1980s. However, the new second-child policy ignited a storm of controversy, and the possible reasons are as follows. First, those young couples, eligible for the new policy, feel weighed down by the pressure of supporting a large family—four elderly parents and one child, let alone the cost of raising another kid. Furthermore, relevant regulations on maternity leave for women delivering a second child are, so far, not issued. Also, the loss inflicted by two maternity leaves deters companies from hiring or promoting a woman of child-bearing age. Given the above discussions, the universal two-child policy is nothing but a temporary solution. The need, I believe , is for the government to introduce a sound and systematic population development and management mechanism to balance the population structure, thus maintaining the sustainable development of China.

解析     图中的两对年轻夫妻对生二孩表现出截然不同的态度。围城外的年轻夫妻欣喜若狂,迫不及待地推开城门,想要加人生二孩的行列之中。而围城内的年轻夫妻却愁容满面,对是否生二孩犹豫不决。显然,四个需要赡养的父母已经令城内的二人倍感压力,使他们对二孩望而却步。考生在写作中可先联系图画内容点明主题,然后分析二孩政策引发争议的背后原因,最后针对这一新政策发表个人观点或提出建议。
    第一段:联系图画,点明主题。首先点明图画主题,接着分别描述两对年轻夫妻对二孩的不同反应,以突显二孩政策令人喜忧参半的事实。
    第二段:深入分析。先介绍二孩政策出台的缘由,继而分析该政策引发争议的背后原因,如赡养老人的压力、养育孩子的花销、相关法规的不完善等。
    第三段:总结评论。指出我们真正需要的是一个健全且具有系统性的人口发展及管理机制。
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