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  3. Write an essay based on the following charts. In your writing you should 1. interpret the charts and 2. give your comm

Write an essay based on the following charts. In your writing you should 1. interpret the charts and 2. give your comm

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问题     Write an essay based on the following charts. In your writing you should
    1. interpret the charts and
    2. give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words.
   
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答案 Causes and Losses of Fires in a City of China As is clearly described in the charts above, some important changes have taken place in terms of the causes of fire and the losses. The fire caused by smokers fell last year, but the losses increased. The fires caused by defective insulation went up, but the losses reduced. And the fires caused by children playing with matches kept the same, but the losses rose. It is of no difficulty for us to put forward some factors to account for these changes. In the first place, the general public have been aware of the seriousness of fire and begun to care more about the matter. Therefore, compared with the year before last, the number of fires caused by smokers last year was fewer, by children playing with matches almost the same, while by defective insulation more. In the second, the government has not implemented the laws strictly and the punishment has not been severe enough. Thus, the fire loss of last year was higher than that of the year before last on the whole even though the number of fires reduced. To the best of my understanding, we should take some positive and powerful actions to prevent the trend from getting worse. On the one hand, the government should improve the degree of implementing laws and punish severely those who break the laws. On the other hand, the general public should raise their consciousness and take precautions against fire.
解析     本文共三段，12句话，238词。
    首段共四句。首句从整体上讲述图表反映的是什么现象——火灾原因和火灾造成的损失变化。第二句、第三句和第四句详细描述变化情况。
    第二段共五句，总分关系。首句宏观说明这种变化是有原因的。第二句、第三句讲述了第一个变化原因 (in the first place)。第四句、第五句则讲述了变化的第二个原因(in the second place)。
    第三段共三句，总分关系。首句提出自己观点——应该采取有力措施解决这个问题，第二句和第三句分别阐述了具体措施(on the one hand，on the other hand)。
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