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With the development of technology, mobile phones have more and more functions and lots of college students are engaged in their

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问题     With the development of technology, mobile phones have more and more functions and lots of college students are engaged in their mobile phones all the time, such as surfing on social networking sites, reading e-books, etc. This obsession of cellphone arouses a heated discussion and its disadvantages can not be ignored. What do you think of this phenomenon?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    The Disadvantages of Cellphone Obsession
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答案 The Disadvantages of Cellphone Obsession In our daily life, there is no denying that cellphones bring great convenience to us, but at the same time, many young people’s behaviors of spending too much time and energy on mobile phones also bring serious disadvantages that can not be ignored. In my opinion, there are several disadvantages of cellphone obsession. First of all, cellphone obsession reduces face-to-face communication, which will isolate people from each other. Compared to cellphone communication, face-to-face communication has a higher quality of understanding because of the non-verbal communicative gestures. Relying on text messages to communicate can only create a detached society. Second, cellphone obsession is destroying people’s relationships. Good relationships need direct and frequent maintenance. Yet cellphone obsession is driving us away from people around us. For example, we can often find that many are busy taking pictures, writing captions and uploading them to their microblogs, and few are engaged in talking. Third, cellphone obsession may even lead to social phobia. If things continue this way, people will get used to shunning interpersonal contact and even lose the ability to effectively and appropriately communicate with each other, especially with strangers. To sum up, we should remember that the original purpose of the cellphones is to provide convenience for people to get in touch with each other. So we should avoid cellphone obsession and make good use of other functions of mobile phones.
解析     本题是一个给定观点型题目。要求考生分析沉迷于手机这一现象及其带来的坏处，并提出自己的观点，然后进行论证。可根据以下思路展开写作：
    思路1：沉迷于手机的原因。
    手机功能日趋强大，甚至可以替代电脑的很多功能，尤其是现在的智能手机以及层出不穷的应用软件很吸引大学生；其次，手机的交流方式与面对面交流相比具有匿名性、即时性的特点，尤其是智能手机功能强大，聊天、游戏等功能正在改变着人们的交流模式，其新颖、时尚和便捷的特征对大学生有着很强的吸引力。
    思路2：沉迷于手机的危害。
    首先，手机交流在一定程度上取代了人与人之间的面对面沟通，令人际关系疏离；其次，沉迷于手机实际上破坏了和谐的人际关系，很多人在亲友聚会、单位活动、会议会谈、饭局应酬的过程中发微博、玩游戏等，会让人觉得他们不重视、不尊重在场的人；最后，沉迷于手机容易患上社交恐惧症，在一些社交场合玩手机很多时候是出于对现实的逃避或者拒绝，长此以往，社交能力将会受到更加严重的影响。
    范文选取了思路2，从三个方面阐述沉迷于手机的危害。
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