For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Craze for Entering the Civil Service following the

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Craze for Entering the Civil Service following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
    1.近年来人们纷纷参加公务员考试
    2.公务员考试带来的社会弊端
    3.我的观点

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答案 The Craze for Entering the Civil Service Sonic people think that working as a civil servant is the best way to maintain a stable life. And this belief motivates millions of people to take civil service examinations. Deep in my heart, I also have been asking myself the same question again and again: why do I have little interest in civil service examinations? The reasons, in my mind, can he summed up in three aspects. First of all, it is a waste of time and money for both the nation and the candidates to arrange or prepare for the civil service examinations. In the second place, the unbelievably high ratio of the applicants to the posts may lead to the government corruption. Last but not least, it is unreasonable for people to plunge into taking the examinations without reflecting on their own strengths and weaknesses. A serious reflection on ourselves and the civil service examinations, I firmly believe, will help us embark on the right track of both job-hunting and our future life. To sum up, it is not advisable for the job seekers to take civil service examinations blindly. In addition, the society and the government should offer more job opportunities so that people have a wider range of job choices.

解析     第一段指出人们纷纷参加公务员考试,因为他们认为公务员是一个保持生活稳定的工作。最后一句提出了作者的不同态度,引出第二段。
    第二段主要阐述考试大军挤独木桥的弊端。例如:国家和个人都要耗费时间和金钱来组织、准备考试;应试者和岗位的悬殊比例可能导致政府腐败;大家不考虑自身优劣势,盲目考试等。
    最后一段指出对自身及公务员考试的认真反思将有助于我们的求职及未来的人生之路。接着提出了针对公务员热的相应措施,以求帮助人们树立理性的求职观。本段首句I firmly believe为插入语,增强表达效果,末句使用so that引导的目的状语从句,增加句式的变化。
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