A phenomenon emerges that an increasing number of on-job people, especially those in their 20’s or early 30’s, return to univers

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问题     A phenomenon emerges that an increasing number of on-job people, especially those in their 20’s or early 30’s, return to university out of various reasons. Some people return to school in the hope of temporarily avoiding pressures from current work and life, while others intend to grasp the golden opportunity for self-advancement before it is too late. What do you think of the phenomenon?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    Back to School for Self-improvement or Shelter?
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 Back to School for Self-improvement or Shelter? Now, a popular trend of on-job people returning to university has aroused people’s concern. Some return to school with an aim to shelter from pressures, while others desire for self-improvement. From my perspective, I firmly agree with the latter. Firstly, people should return to university to gain special skills that are more career-oriented. Having been working over a span of years, they know better which capacities and professional skills they are deficient in. What’s more, they may return to get the diploma and advanced knowledge that will contribute to pay rise, promotion, new employment or career hopping. Additionally, they can make acquaintance with more elites. Students with perceptive insight can exchange views and optimize their resources available. While those who return to university to shelter from burden should face reality for reasons below. First, it is a waste of time and money to wander in campus without concrete goals. If they devote to their jobs, they will gain greater achievements and profits. Moreover, they are likely to miss opportunities of promotion or work training. In addition, since they will be confronted with pressures again in the near future, it is useless and even risky to consider university as an ivory tower. In view of the discussion above, on-job people should return to university for self-improvement rather than for shelter.

解析     本题是一个观点选择型题目。论证观点时不必局限于一种思路,避免偏激和跑题;可采用反面例证,这样更有说服力。
    思路1:重返校园是为了提升个人能力。
    可以从提升个人能力的角度出发,以积极的态度对待在职人员重返校园的现象。他们可以通过再次学习书本知识弥补工作中的不足,有针对性的学习效率更高。与此同时,还可以拓展人脉,提高学历。因此,重返校园值得鼓励。
    思路2:重返校园的利弊因人而异。
    有些人重返校园的目的是加强专业知识的学习,但有些人是为了逃避社会中的残酷竞争。出于此种考虑,应从两个不同方面进行对比分析,最终鼓励人们为了学习重返校园。
    范文论证部分从两方面对比展开,肯定了为学习重返校园的积极意义,阐释为逃避竞争而重返校园的消极影响,结论部分重申观点:支持人们为提升能力重返校园。
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