For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags. You shoul

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
    1.一次性塑料袋曾广为使用
    2.由此带来的问题
    3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义

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答案 Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags Recently, limiting the use of disposable plastic bags has been brought to public attention in China. No one denies that disposable plastic bags once gained great popularity in our daily life. However, the excessive use of disposable plastic bags can lead to severe consequences. In the first place, in the past few years, there has been a sharp growth in using plastic bags, which has given rise to a series of problems such as more serious environmental pollution. What’s worse, some bags are of poor quality, and even harmful to our health. Awareness of the matter in question is one thing, but how to cope with it is another thing. To solve the problem, using of disposable plastic bags in supermarkets should be limited strictly. As a result, people come to raise awareness of environmental protection and the cost in supermarkets will be cut down as well. Only in this way can we achieve the sustainable development of our country.

解析     第一段提出一次性塑料袋曾广为使用的现象,指出限制使用一次性塑料袋已引起人们的广泛关注。
    第二段分析使用一次性塑料袋导致的问题:一、导致严重的环境污染;二、危害人体健康。本段中第二句是一个带有非限制性定语从句的复合句,which引导的非限制性定语从句引出一次性塑料袋导致的问题,这样使句子结构紧凑,句式多变。
    第三段总结限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义,如提高人们的环保意识,促进社会可持续发展。该段最后一句是Only in this way引导的倒装句,既强调了解决此问题的意义,又使句式多样化,是作文中的亮点句式。
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