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  3. You work for a large company. You are going to be transferred to another department within your company. Write an email to all

You work for a large company. You are going to be transferred to another department within your company. Write an email to all

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问题 You work for a large company. You are going to be transferred to another department within your company.
Write an email to all staff:
    telling them which department you are moving to
    saying when you will be moving department
    explaining what your new responsibilities will be.
Write 40-50 words.
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答案Sample A Dear All I am writing to inform you that I am going to change a department next Monday 5 May. In My new position will take place in the Marketing department, where I am going to be responsible of promoting the new products. And also to ensure their productivity. Regards Band 3 The candidate has addressed all the content points. The answer is concise, and although it contains a number of errors, these do not impede communication. The overall effect on the reader is satisfactory. Sample B To: all staff From: Karen Miiller / Sales Manager Date: June 2nd, 2007 Subject: Department Transfer Dear Colleagues, I would like you to know that I will leave this department in order to take over a new job in the purchasing department. My new employment will start on July 1st, 2007 and my main duty will be to negotiate supply contracts. Thank you. Karen Band 5 The candidate has fully addressed all the content points. The language is natural and well controlled in its usage. The overall effect on the reader is very positive.
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