请以A Worried Mother为名给一家儿童日报写一封信,反映目前电视节目的情况。要点如下: 1.科教类节目太少,暴力类节目太多; 2.不能用儿童做广告,这样不利于孩子成长; 3.不能随意改变著名的诗歌和成语。 注意:

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问题    请以A Worried Mother为名给一家儿童日报写一封信,反映目前电视节目的情况。要点如下:
   1.科教类节目太少,暴力类节目太多;
   2.不能用儿童做广告,这样不利于孩子成长;
   3.不能随意改变著名的诗歌和成语。
   注意:
   词数100词左右。

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答案Dear Editor, May 21st, 2009 I am writing this letter to call your attention to the negative effect of some television programs today. As you know, at present children’s programs are often full of violence and advertisements of poor quality instead of the ones in science and education. I am really worried because this is not all. For instance, nowadays it is fashionable that many children are asked to play the roles of advertisements. This is bad in that after watching the advertisements the children tend to blindly compare themselves with others. Another bad thing is that the poems and proverbs, the cream of the Chinese culture, are often changed on purpose. In my opinion, all these do harm to the sound growth of our children. I don’t think we should go on like this. Therefore, I sincerely hope you can take some measures to move in the right direction. Yours, A Worried Mother

解析    第一步:审题
   1.题型:提纲作文;2.文体:书信。
   第二步:框架分析
   1.注意格式正确;2.将要点自然包括进去。
   第三步:列出写作思路
   1.目前电视节目的问题;2.自己的建议。
   第四步:列出关键词和词组
   I am writing to;negative effect Of some TV promgrams;violence;science and education;quality advertisements;misleading;poems and idioms;blindly compare…with…;in my opinion;I sincerely hope;etc.
   第五步:落笔成文
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