Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a computer you us

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问题     Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a computer you used at college. Your advertisement may include its brand, specifications/features, condition and price, and your contact information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.  

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答案 Computer on Sale With the advent of Internet era, the computer becomes a necessity in our daily life. As a college student, a computer is essential no matter what you do, such as doing homework, acquiring knowledge or enjoying entertainments. If you desire to buy one but hesitate to do so for its high price, now there is a good chance in front of you. There is a gently used Lenovo laptop which is sold only for 1,500 RMB in urgency due to the nearly coming graduation of the owner. When it comes to computers, what concerns you most is the operating speed. The first advantage of this laptop is its fast operating speed, starting up within 20 seconds. With its large storage and high clarity, it is suitable for people who are fond of playing games and watching videos. The laptop weighs just 3. 5kg and its screen size is 14 inches, which make it easy to carry during your commute or during the travel. When you are in need of a reliable portable computer, this laptop is an excellent choice. If you have the needs, please contact Li Lei at 15737154012.

解析     这是一篇应用文写作。本次考的是广告,要求考生在校园网上发布一则出售二手电脑的广告。广告内容包括电脑的品牌、规格、使用状况、价位以及卖方联系方式。相较于往年的议论文写作,今年的应用文写作虽然表面上看起来较为容易,但实际上考察了学生对生活细节的观察能力以及英语语言应用能力,考生在阐述品牌、规格以及使用状况时可能出现困难或者表述缺乏规范性。考生可根据自己的生活经验和对电脑的了解,对自己的电脑进行描述。
    作文可分为三段,结构如下。   
    第一段:阐述电脑的必要性,表明有一台电脑想转手,并阐述转手的原因以及价位。
    第二段:对电脑的详细情况进行介绍,包括电脑的品牌、规格和使用状况。
    第三段:鼓励顾客购买,并附上卖方联系方式。
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