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The graph below shows passenger revenue(in £m)and the percentage of trains arriving on time for a train company, Cruiseline, for
The graph below shows passenger revenue(in £m)and the percentage of trains arriving on time for a train company, Cruiseline, for
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2013-06-20
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The graph below shows passenger revenue(in £m)and the percentage of trains arriving on time for a train company, Cruiseline, for each quarter of a two-year period, 2005-2006.
Using the information from the graph, write a short report describing the passenger revenue and the percentage of trains arriving on time during the two-year period.
Write 120-140 words.
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Sample A The following report will describe the changes in the passenger revenue and the percentage of trains arriving on time. For both 1st and 2nd quarter the passenger revenue has increased in comparison with last year results. The last two quarters’ passenger revenues have decreased drastically, resulting in less than 25% of the original revenue. As we can observe the punctuality of the trains has fallen down. In 2005 it did not go under 85% while in 2006 it fell to less than 70%. Quarter by quarter the punctuality is worst in 2006 then in 2005. We can appreciate the reduction of arriving on time observing the 3rd quarter results. In 2005 the company had its worst result(85%)and at the same period of 2006 it fell down to 69%. In conclusion, the percentage of trains arriving late has increased and the passenger revenue rose first to end up falling. Band 1 This script has notable content omissions. From the first paragraph, it is impossible to visualise the bar chart for passenger revenue. In addition, the confusion caused by the second paragraph has a very negative effect on the target reader. Sample B Report: Cruseline train company The graph shows the passenger revenue and the percentage of trains arriving on time during the years 2005 and 2006 of a train company called Cruiseline. Regarding the passenger revenue during 2005 it started around £m 280 in the first quarter, increased slowely to £m 300 in the 3rd quarter and then fell to around £m 290 at the end of the year. In 2006 the revenue increased steadidy to £m 330 during the 2nd quarter before falling rapidly to around £m 230 in the 3rd quarter ending at £m 225 at the end of 2006. The percentage of trains arriving on time stayed stable at around 88% during the 1st and 2nd quarter in 2005, then decreased to 85% in the 3rd quartat before recovering at around 87% at the end of 2005. Till the 2nd quarter in 2006 the percentage decreased steadidly to 85% before falling rapidly to 68%(3rd quarter)and recovering to 75% at the end of 2006. Band 4 All content points included. Natural use of language which is virtually error free. However, the range of language used is not sufficient for a band 5.
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