For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Charity. Your essay should start with a brief descriptio

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Charity. Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 On Charity In this picture, we can see a big hand is throwing a coin while five small hands rising high are scrambling for it. This is exactly a reflection of the imbalanced awkwardness in the field of charity—the donations are too few to meet the needs of disadvantaged groups. This is particularly true of China, a developing country with the largest population in the world. In our country, people who need help such as the disabled, the poor, the left-behind children and those suffering from natural disasters account for a large proportion while the institutions and organizations for charity and public undertakings are few and far between. In addition, a lack of transparency in fund managment leads to a heavy loss and waste of donations, leaving those in need with almost nothing. To improve this, the concerted efforts of government, enterprises and individuals are essential If more and more people are willing to donate while fewer people need help, the picture that five hands contending for one coin will not been seen any more.

解析     本文主要讲述慈善事业“僧多粥少”的局面。
    第一段简要描述图片内容,目前慈善事业很尴尬,满足不了弱势群体的需求。
    第二段由This is particularly true of China自然过渡,指出在中国这种情况尤其明显,并说明导致这种局面的原因。中国人口众多,需要帮助的人群比重相应也大,但慈善和公益组织却比较少。另外,慈善机构资金运转不透明也是一个重要原因。
    第三段总结全文,建议政府、企业和个人一起努力来解决这一问题。
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