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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Competition and Cooperation. You should write at leas

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Competition and Cooperation. You should write at leas

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Competition and Cooperation.  You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
    1. 人生中竞争很重要
    2．然而，合作也很重要
    3．我的看法
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答案 Competition and Cooperation Competition is very important in a person’s life. The so-called "jungle principle" emphasizes that the fittest survives, which expands the essence of competition to a profound extent. In our modern society, so many well-educated and talented people strive to be outstanding and establish themselves,’ and competition, the way for them to realize their dream, becomes especially more severe than we think it should be. A person should compete for his survival; otherwise, he would be thrown out of the tide of his age. Cooperation, however, also plays a significant role in a person’s career. The development of transportation and communication brings our world into a mobile stage. People all over the world get in touch with each other more easily than before. It is hard for a person who is isolated from the society to have a deep understanding of the world he lives in, let alone accomplishment in his career. In some sense, cooperation is the requirement of the information era. My viewpoint is that the way for a person to achieve success is to keep a good balance between competition and cooperation. In other words, he has to cooperate with others to be more competitive, and compete to get a better environment for cooperation.
解析     用词亮点：(1) 在第一段第二句中，emphasizes意思为“强调”，用于解释某一事物，也可以用indicates，implies等。(2) 第一段第三句中，strive to意思为“努力做……”。类似表达法有try hard to，make efforts to，endeavor to等。(3) 第一段尾句中，otherwise意思为“否则的话”，是含蓄虚拟语气的标志。(4) 第二段倒数第二句中，let alone意思为“更不用说”，表示否定意义的追加．类似表达法有much less，still less等。 (5) 第三段尾句中，In other words意思为“换而言之”，进一步说明，使观点更具体。
    句式亮点：(1) 第一段第三句中，the way for them to realize their dream是competition的同位语，这样用可以使语言简练，并增加语言的地道性；此外，该句利用比较结构起强调作用。(2) 第三段首句中“My viewpoint is that…”意思为“我的观点是……”，相当于“I think that…”。
    篇章亮点：(1) 第二段首句中把连接词however插在主谓之间，表示对照关系，承上启下，过渡自然。(2) 第二段尾句中In some sense意思为“从某种意义上讲”，委婉地对上述内容加以总结。
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