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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on success by referring to the saying "You can never cross the ocean

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on success by referring to the saying "You can never cross the ocean

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on success by referring to the saying "You can never cross the ocean until you have the courage to lose sight of the shore." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to make the first step to success. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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答案 There is such a saying, "you can never cross the ocean until you have the courage to lose sight of the shore." This saying not only emphasizes the importance of courage for success but also indicates that courage is the first step toward success. Indeed, having the courage to take the first step to act is quite essential for success. As we all know, human beings are great thinkers, capable of coming up with brilliant schemes. Yet from scheme to success there is a long way to go. Without the boldness to make the first step, no scheme can translate into success. Take Bill Gates as an example. If he had not been bold enough to choose to drop out of Harvard and embark on a software business venture, he might not be able to build up his Microsoft empire. As a college student, I think the first step to success for me is to dedicate myself to study and to learn more useful skills, which will pave the way for my future career. I know for sure that if I don’t work hard, I have no chance to savor the beautiful scenery beyond the ocean.
解析     这是一篇名言分析型文章。首先要求考生就“没有勇气告别海岸，就永远无法跨越海洋”做出评论，并提出自己的观点；其次要求考生利用举例论证的方法阐述自己的观点；最后还要说明自己怎么做来迈出成功的第一步。根据题目要求，文章的写作思路安排如下：
第一段：简要评述题中的引语，指出其深意；
第二段：通过举例论述，来阐述自己的观点；
第三段：说明自己怎么做来迈出成功的第一步。
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