Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly,

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问题     Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) explain its intended meaning, and then
    3) give your comments.
    You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
   

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答案 As is illustrated in the picture, the two disabled persons whose crippled legs are bound together travel in the journey of life. Accordingly, this far-reaching picture reflects a common phenomenon in today’s society: the people who are in the dark and want to turn the corner can not make it respectively but in turn have to choose to pull together in times of trouble. There are several reasons accounting for this. Since we have to live in an on-the-move lifestyle, we may encounter various plights, where it’s better to seek for others’ assistance than to feel over whelmed. Furthermore, if we do not offer help to each other when we confront dilemmas, we will not realize our dream. And to build a harmonious society in China, no issue is as basic as to conduct coordination in face of disasters. Judging from what has been argued above, people have come to realize the value of mutual aid. It is, therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to advocate spirit of supporting each other. To begin with, the government should make laws to encourage people to unite. In addition, people should enhance the awareness of caring each other especially when they are in trouble. Only in those ways, can we make people, even strangers, help each other.

解析     本文正确把握了图画的寓意,文章内容切合题意,并且涵盖了题目中所给的信息点;结构完整合理,层次分明,每一段的段落主题句都出现在句首,段落衔接紧凑。句子形式具有多样性,语言表达通顺。
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