For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an e-mail to change the time of an appointment. You should write at least 120

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an e-mail to change the time of an appointment. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
    1. 给你的朋友Frank发一封e-mail,告诉他由于明天你要参加一场考试,无法按预定计划和他见面;
    2. 对此带来的不便表示抱歉;
    3. 重新约定见面时间。
                 Changing the Time of an Appointment

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答案Dear Frank, Sorry I won’ t be able to meet you tomorrow morning, when I am going to have an unexpected but important exam, which will last two hours. That is to say, I can’ t make our 11 o’ clock appointment. As you know it takes me more than half all hour to arrive at the hotel you stay in. I am afraid it would be too late for us to meet and we could not have enough time to discuss the problem. I know this may cause you some trouble, for which I must apologize to you. I will be free next Saturday--June 21st. Will you be free on that day? If it’ s OK, please call me and we will make it a date. Thanks. Yours Jane

解析     题目的要求是写一封e-mail,随着电脑走进千家万户,以及Internet的普及,e-mail(electronic mail)便成为在网上最常使用的服务。那么e-mail有什么写作要领呢?
    e-mail一般使用非正式的文体,因此正文前的称呼通常无须使用诸如“Dear Mr.John”之类的表达。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其名,但对长辈或上级最好使用头衔加上姓,如 Mr.X。
    E-mail文体的另外一个特点是简单明了,便于阅读。
    信尾客套话通常也很简明。常常只需一个词,如:Thanks,Best,不需要用一般信函中的 Sincerely yours或Best regards。称呼和正文之间、段落之间、正文和信尾客套话之间一般空一行,开头无须空格。
    本题要求是写一封改变约会时间的电子邮件。首先明确告诉对方因为有重要考试,所以无法见面。接着为此而道歉。最后提到重新约定时间见面。
    本文的语言简洁、明了,短文中运用了三个分别由when,which,as引导的从句,使内容非常紧凑。分别用appointment和date两个词表达了约会之意,词汇也富有变化。
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