Directions: For this part, you are allowed 35 minutes to write a composition based on the following table. Please base your comp

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问题    Directions: For this part, you are allowed 35 minutes to write a composition based on the following table. Please base your composition on the following outline:
   (1) State the changes in people’s diet in the past five years.
   (2) Give possible reasons for the changes.
   (3) Draw your own conclusion.
   You should write approximately 160—200 words on ANSWER SHEET2.

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答案 As can be seen in the table, there have been great changes in people’s diet in the past five years. Grain used to be the Chinese main food, but now it is playing a less important role in people’s diet, while the consumption of some high energy foods, such as milk and meat, has increased steadily. What caused these changes? The changes in diet can be accounted for by a number of factors. I think the reasons are as follows: First, the open policy brings the people opportunities to earn a lot of money. People are much wealthier than before. With a higher income, they can afford to buy food that they want to eat. Second, people nowadays pay more attention to the structure of their diet. They are seeking the most reasonable diet structure, which will do good to their health. Finally, owing to the economic reform, meat and milk, which were scare in the past, are produced in large quantities. To sum up, with the development of the country, the level of the Chinese people’s life has changed in the past five years. I’m sure there will be greater changes in the future.

解析    第一步:审题
   1.题型:图示作文    2.文体:说明文
   第二步:框架分析
   1.一般文章格式    2.点出每个要点
   第三步:列出写作思路
   1.说明图表的含义    2.阐明原因    3.总结全文
   第四步:列出关键词和词组
   as can be seen in the table; great changes in people’s diet in the past five years; used to be the Chinese main food; playing a less important role in people’s diet; can be accounted for by a number of factors; brings the people opportunities to earn a lot of money; can afford to buy food that they want to eat; pay more attention to the structure of their diet; seeking the most reasonable diet structure; produced in large quantities; there will be greater changes in the future, etc.
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