For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence "Nowadays more and more people take de

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence "Nowadays more and more people take delight in offering help to the needy." You can make comments, cite examples, or use your personal experiences to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 Roses Given, Fragrance in Hand Nowadays more and more people take delight in offering help to the needy. Helping others in need is one of the traditional virtues of the Chinese nation. Thus it deserves more attention and applause. In the first place, people who give a helping hand to others are more likely to gain a sense of accomplishment and happiness. Besides, the most remarkable significance of helping the needy is that people who have received warmness and kindness are more likely to pass on this love to others. Last but not least, this sort of exemplary behavior plays a vital role in cultivating children’s awareness of caring for others, which makes a lot of sense in creating a more civilized and harmonious society. As the old saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. I really believe that a brighter future is awaiting us as long as everyone is ready for giving a hand to other people at any time.

解析 引出话题:越来越多的人喜欢向有需要的人提供帮助,这种传统美德值得关注和掌声。
分别用“In the first place…”“Besides…”“Last but not least…”来引出三个分论点。
通过引用谚语“roses given, fragrance in hand (赠人玫瑰,手留余香)”重申帮助他人的重要意义,同时展望未来。
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